:O This is the point in the story where, if it were a movie, there would be an ominous single bass drum beat, that reverberated around the theater, grabbing everyone’s attention and keeping it there.

I couldn’t help but think of V for Vendetta (the comic) on seeing this. I have no idea why but up to this point, the atmosphere and something in the way you tell the story is very close to that. Of course, this impression is broken on the next page when Dea’s bright red hair jumps from the page and breaks the monochrome color palette. ;)

(Yes, that was a clumsy reference to the fanfic about Dea being the splash of color in J’s monochrome world. If the author is still around: I have learnt to love that phrase – thank you.)

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